Wednesday, April 10, 2013

I Can't


I can't, I like to say
Want to, but feel there is no way
Feel trapped, bound, and stuck
Not much faith in my luck
My future feels bleak
Been riding out a bad luck streak
Feel like the clouds should clear
Too many years just haven't been my year

8 comments:

  1. That's a pretty powerful poem. Sounds like a snapshot of someone with depression.

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    1. Ya, I guess your right. Thanks for your visit and comment. Come back soon!

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  2. Just stopping by for the A-Z Challenge. Please check us out and sign up to follow if you like what you see. Juliet atCity Muse Country Muse

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  3. WoW! Very deep and touching.
    My "I" post was "I Can't Said the Ant, very light in comparison.
    Happy A-Z April!

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    1. LOL, I have to write something more upbeat too.

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  4. That's a powerful photo and poem. I think my heart just swallowed it as its own.

    Laura Eno – A Shift in Dimensions

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    1. Very deep comment! Thanks for your visit and comment. Come back soon.

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